Hey everyone!

Since the last Know the Novel focused more on the middle of the novel, I decided why not write a post on that this week?
If you’re like me, you probably don’t have too many issues planning the beginning of your novel, and writing the end is fairly easy. But when it comes to writing the middle, that’s when the struggles really begin. Sometimes you don’t know what happens in the middle, or you do but the middle ends up being much shorter than you’d like or originally intended. So how do you fill up the middle without adding anything unnecessary to the plot? Well, there’s a few ways to do it while still making sure that what you’re adding is important to the story.
1. FOCUS ON YOUR CHARACTER’S ARCS
If you know me, you know I love character arcs. And the most important part of a character arc is when the character finally changes right? Not exactly. While the change is absolutely an important part of your character’s arc, it’s important not to forget about what led up to that change. Your character needs to work for their change, otherwise it just doesn’t work. Because who likes a character who suddenly becomes better for no apparent reason? It’s harder for the readers to relate with or root for your character if they don’t actively work on becoming better. And don’t make it easy for them either. Arcs feel much more satisfying if your character is truly challenged. Let them doubt. Let them fail. Let them struggle but push on despite it. Let them fight the change but slowly and even reluctantly begin to accept it and work towards it. So if you’re looking for something to expand on in your novel, adding to your character’s arc will add some more depth to your novel.
2. BUILD CHARACTER RELATIONSHIPS
This one may tie a bit into the first point, but whether your story is about found family or romance, its rare for characters not to have relationships. Have your characters interact— show us their friendships. Let them laugh together, fight together, cry together, comfort each other. Let them push each other to grow. Let them care for each other. Or even if they have a negative relationship, let it affect your character. It’s easier for readers to care for your characters if they see their relationships and see them grow through it, and having characters interact in meaningful ways will add so much more to the story, and not just when it comes to the word count.
3. RAISE THE STAKES
Maybe your characters have it too easy. Maybe you need to throw a few extra hurdles at them. Or take the stakes that are already there and raise them higher. If your characters have a plan, let everything that could go wrong go wrong. Make it personal. Hit your character where it hurts. But it’s important to always give the characters an out. Sometimes when making things seem hopeless, you might actually end up making things hopeless and find that your characters can’t find a way out of their situation. So make sure that they do have a way to get up after you hit them down (unless you actually mean for them to end up in a situation where they can’t get out).
4. ADD ANOTHER SUBPLOT
Okay, before you start giving every character you have a full-fledged character arc and heartbreaking backstory (and yes, I’ve been guilty of doing this a lot), consider what another subplot would do to your novel. It may add more to the wordcount, but if it’s not done carefully then there’s a chance that it might end up taking away from the story. But if you find that the one side character you ended up loving more than expected could actually add more to the story if you give them their own side quest and/or character arc, go for it!
So that’s it! Hopefully this can help anyone who’s struggling with the middle of their novel.
Thanks for reading! – Em















